Of Elmo and old poetry
August 31, 2008 · Print This Article
Happy Labor Day weekend! Speaking of labor, frankly, this has been a challenging year. Exciting, but challenging. A music blog is the tip of the iceberg, as far as what ONE Atlanta has in the works. There are a few of us working hard behind the scenes to get some exciting things off the ground, all having to do with the amazing community of artists to which we’re connected in this town. We know that this our time to take these specific steps toward building up so many of the people in this town that we believe in. I know that’s vague, but as I’ve said before, please stay tuned to ONE Atlanta.
Anyway, of all things, it was an Elmo puppet that got me thinking about an old poem of mine that applies here. My youngest child was playing with it this weekend, and I recalled that I bought it for my oldest some ten years ago, while shopping at Fisherman’s Wharf in San Francisco. As I recall, that night my band Smalltown Poets parked our bus in an empty lot somewhere near the bay. Missing my wife and then-infant son back in Atlanta, I penned this poem about the struggle of living up to the vision God can place on one’s heart and the difficult tasks that go along with it. (There’s a link to explain one particularly obscure reference in the poem.)
The bottom line is that the right path is often the hard path. But there is strength for the journey if God has called us to it. Maybe some of you can relate to this poem. Writing it was certainly therapeutic.
What message do I bring so well
That He would dare illumine me
And set me on these distant hills
To make my pitch imperfectly?
Were I a man of bereft of muse
Directed to a simpler field
I’d grip the pulpit or the plow
And glory in such grace revealed
But with my charge and with its price
I’ll make my peace but day to day
And put each method to the test
To know full well that I obey
I would for such a call rejoice
Where lovers’ lips are ever kissed
Where sons awake to fathers’ hands
And little joys are never missed
But with my charge and with its price
I’ll make my peace but day to day
And put each method to the test
To know full well that I obey
You’ll find me where the waters part
Still leaving breadcrumb trails about
Or by the springs at Meribah
Debating yet to drink or doubt
But with my charge and with its price
I’ll make my peace but day to day
And put each method to the test
To know full well that I obey
Until I’m shown a better way




Thanks for this.
Made me cry.
I understand this all too well.
This was so helpful to read.
I have never read that poem. Beautiful!
Your loving mom.
Thanks, Meg. Coming from you that’s a huge compliment. You’re an amazing wordsmith, friend, and I pray daily for God’s grace on your travels. And, Mom, of course you love everything I write! I love you!
Dang, son…make your brother cry on his birthday, why don’t ya….
Awesomeness.
Hmmm…I’ve been to Meribah a few times this year.
I remember this poem well. Seems it wasn’t long after you wrote it, that you were shown the better way.